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    小升初作文的高分方法

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      小學作文的寫作需要一定的知識積累,才能寫出高分作文。下面是學習啦小編帶來的小升初語文作文的高分方法。

      一、素材的多角度立意

      意大利著名畫家達·芬奇的老師對達·芬奇所說的自己畫蛋的體會:即使是同一只蛋,只要變換一下角度,形狀便立即不同了。這告訴我們對生活中發生的事件我們可以多角度分析。文章源于生活,它的立意亦應多角度進行。

      我們以一個發生在同學們身邊的事件為例。

      今年春天,我和爸爸來到高爾夫球場,第一次學打高爾夫球?唇叹氉龊芎唵,我按照教練的要求去做,卻發現和想象的不同,要么桿碰不上球,要么球出去就偏離了方向,經歷了一次次失敗,我終于成功了。

      就這一事例,我們可從如下角度立意:一、最大的敵人是自己,戰勝自己就會走向成功;二、一招一式,看似簡單,做起來難,失之毫厘,謬以千里;三、成功需要方法;四、運動帶來快樂……

    小升初作文的高分方法

      這樣,一個素材,可以根據命題的不同,確定立意,設置情節,確定描寫重點。但無論從哪個角度立意,打球的動作細節是不能丟的。

      二、寫好文章的細節

      學生練習作文的過程中,很多孩子注意了情節的起伏,語言的流暢,但總感覺文章空泛,這是為什么呢?忽視了細節描寫。

      怎樣寫好細節,簡單地說,細節描寫要還原生活,去發現場景細節、服飾細節、語言細節、動作細節、心理細節等,按照生活本來的面目去描摹。一篇文章,恰到好處地運用細節描寫,能起到烘托環境氣氛、刻畫人物性格和揭示主題思想的作用。

      如何將“陌生叔叔幫我把車修好”寫細,我們首先要還原生活場景,在頭腦中勾勒出雪中修車圖,再從這一圖畫中去尋找描寫的細節。

      這是一位同學的作文片斷:“叔叔迅速地摘下手套,用右手拿著鏈條,左手幫著把鏈條搬過去,鏈條一點點地扣上去了,一節一節地扣住了后輪的齒輪。‘咣當’一聲,鏈條滑了出來,這一次努力前功盡棄。我的心咯噔一下,萬一叔叔告訴我修不好,我該怎么辦呀!可事情并非如我想象,只見叔叔向攏起的雙手呵了呵氣,又蹲下了身子。他為了不讓鏈條彈開,用右手把鏈條往前面齒輪上套住,然后右手拉住鏈條往后齒輪上移,左手護住鏈條不讓它再滑出來。后來,他看到位置有些偏,就用左手把它移正再裝,潔白的雪花落在了他凍得通紅的滿是油污的手上,我知道他的手一定很冷,很冷,可他的心一定很熱,很熱。終于,鏈條一節一節地和齒輪扣住了。他猛一轉腳踏板,車子居然又完好地轉動起來。”文章中最直觀的細節是叔叔修車的動作細節,摘、拿、套、拉、護、移、轉等動詞的使用,寫出了叔叔雪中修車的不容易,突出了人物精神。其次應當是外貌細節和心理細節的描寫襯托了人物美好的心靈。

      每個人觀察生活的角度和經歷不同,再現的生活場景也就不同,但無論采用怎樣的方法,我們達到這樣一種境地為最好——做到寫人則如見其人,寫景則如臨其境。

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